Wednesday, January 18, 2012

English 10 short story #1


 
Claustrophobia
             The alarms buzzes. Six thirty.  1960. Monday morning. The man groans, smacking his head as he rises from his slumber. The blow reverberates, mimicking the throbbing pulse that was tearing his mind asunder. Rummaging through his garments, he pulls on an old, worn-out, grey sweat shirt. He pours a large cup of steaming coffee and begins the day.   

            The man returns to the grey, infinitesimally cramped cubicles that mimic the bricks in the wall that encloses the building. No space for privacy, no space to breathe. Lunch consists of bread and milk. Times up, return to work. Endless filing and analyzing legal documents. Eight thirty, he goes home, alcohol assists in relieving the repetition of his everyday life. The liquid runs like quicksilver, tearing down his throat, launching him back into his sleep.

            Tuesday morning, he goes about his usual schedule, waking up, pouring coffee, going to work. He notices a co-worker staring in his direction, he turns toward the co-worker and the stares are diverted. After work, he notices the same man walking behind him. Beat. Beat. Beat. His heart thunders. There was no doubt in his mind, the man was following him. He felt the knife he keeps tucked into his sleeve but dismisses the incident as superstition and drowns his worries

            Wednesday morning, he sees the man on the bus to work with him, heart racing, he continues his monotonous cycle of everyday life. After work, the man follows him another day. He ducks into a shop as he watches the man pass by. The question “why” thunders as he struggles with his predicament.

            Thursday morning, the rain beats a pattern on the sidewalk. The man notices his co-worker stalking him around with obvious malevolent intent. He resolves to end it. Ducking into an alley way, he waits for his stalker to pass. He leaps out; slashing his coworker’s limbs and torso. Panic. Everyone runs for their lives as the man ran, cackling as he ravages his co-worker’s chest. 

            Project MKULTRA. 2:00 AM, 1953. The patient shudders and wakes from his dream. The warden looks up in shock, the man hadn’t moved for 10 years now. A grim smile slowly cracks the man’s chalky white face as scarlet blood trickles from his mouth.
                                                                                                                        

1 comment:

  1. I like how the man goes crazy and convinces himself that his "stalker" is a threat. Strong diction and good use of imagery.

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